The style of writing is very straightforward towards the topic.This is acknowledgeable. The essay is not very lengthy and refreshing.After reading through 1st paragraph I could very well make out the points it need to discuss in following paragraphs. They are well elaborated as well.
The point which I gave could be included ,however, as JAVIN commented previously, since essay was long enough there was no need to include that.This is OK. There are no more grammatical errors as far as I could see.
Overall the essay is nice and self-explanatory to understand the pledges needed to be made in upcoming conference in Mexico city.
Thank you for your review.
ReplyDeleteI see your effort of observing the examples that I have cited which could help to answer the prompt appropriately.