Outline of the essay is well planned and gives the mirror image of the essay to be written. The headings of the outline can be improved by staing as argument number 1 and its rebuttal and so on.
Regarding technicality , In-text citations must have space after and before open and close bracket respectively. Other than this evrything else seems to be fine with no spelling mistakes.Grammatically the sentences are correct and whole essay is within the word limits.
The essay uses exhaustive references and comes up with lots of information researched.This is very appreciable and rebuttal statements need enough supporting reasons and arguments. Each paragraph gives a clear idea of what are the opposing and supporting reasons for the side he has chosen to argue with.However, the concluding lines in each paragraphs are absent which must be present in order to state what does your argument leads to. References used are very conclusive of the facts used.There was no point where I could find myself lost with arguments.Information is specific and well organised.His stand is clear and well neuralized.Overall the essay gives a very good impression of argumentative style of the writer.
Thank you Shivam for your review on my WA2 and you have even reviewed on my outline, checked my word count, pointed out my technical mistakes. However, actually I think I have used the parenthesis and left spaces between words and punctuations appropriately. On the other hand, I am quite sure that I used the appropraite APA in-text citation style. Perhaps you need to refer to some sample academic writings such as the "Sample APA Paper" found in Purdue OWL, the recommended website as far as this module is concerned. The link can be found in IVLE.
ReplyDeleteI realized that I might not have a clear argument and rebuttal statements and hence this causes my body paragraph to be vague.